Thursday, December 8, 2022

Poor Quality Example 001

 









I provided a price quotation to one of my returning customers (a seller on bol.com).

 

TASK: A translation into Dutch of an existing user manual from a Chinese supplier. The English text was made in poor English.

 

WHAT WILL I DELIVER:

  •    Nice Layout.
  •    Perfect Dutch text.
  •    Use of the correct technical language.
  •    Unnecessary text/information removed. (FREE)
  •    Correction of the mistakes in the original English text. (FREE)
  •    Proofreading of the Dutch text. (FREE)

 

Unfortunately, my customer decided to give the translation to a cheaper Freelancer.

The translated text is now available online on bol.com. The Dutch text is even worse than the original text.

 

WHAT DID THE BUYER GET FROM THE CHEAPER FREELANCER:

  • Nice Layout. YES
  • Perfect Dutch text. NO
  • Use of the correct technical language. NO
  • Unnecessary text/information removed. NO
  • Correction of the mistakes in the original English text. NO
  • Proofreading of the Dutch text. NO


The first impression of the product that my buyer is selling on bol.com will not be a good one when possible buyers of this product read this badly translated user manual (this user manual can be viewed online on bol.com). The few dollars saved by using a cheaper freelancer are immediately lost as soon as 1 potential buyer of this product decides not to buy it after reading the user manual.

THE BITTERNESS OF POOR QUALITY REMAINS LONG AFTER THE SWEETNESS OF LOW PRICE IS FORGOTTEN.

 

You can see here the final result translated by the cheaper freelancer.

I removed the brand name. 












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